原上 发表于 2013-9-3 09:52:00

<p><font color="#000000" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">河南焦作云台山行</font></p>
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<p><font color="#000000" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">云台据守中原傲,</font></p>
<p><font color="#000000" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">繁遍茱萸念弟情。</font></p>
<p><font color="#000000" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">岭引凤凰枫颂晚,</font></p>
<p><font color="#000000" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">红石演变宇迁行。</font></p>

原上 发表于 2013-10-18 15:35:00

<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">七绝(新韵)秋惶</font></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">何来梦挫亦秋凉,</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">偶遇黄天满面妆。</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">醉业无休聊炫舞,</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">虫吟不在伴清厢.</font></p>
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原上 发表于 2013-10-18 15:38:00

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原上 发表于 2013-10-22 22:06:00

许多人到了后来,便也如“人生若只如初见,何事秋风悲画扇”了。
[此贴子已经被作者于2013-10-22 22:06:25编辑过]

原上 发表于 2013-11-4 09:19:00

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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">七绝<span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 雾霾(新韵)<span> </span></span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">满目迷茫风不再,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">斑斓不惊万事安。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">鬓白难掩韶华逝,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">它日白雪亦尽然。</span></p>

原上 发表于 2013-11-8 11:09:00

<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">七绝<span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 桐柏红叶(新韵)</span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt" lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US">&nbsp;<wbr></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">谁把云霞披峻岭,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">红延远际炫天神。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">妙龄娜女羞赧去,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">水袖轻飘撼古今。</span></p>
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原上 发表于 2013-11-8 11:10:00

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原上 发表于 2013-11-8 11:13:00

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">七律<span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 人生若只如初见<span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US"> </span></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt" lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US">&nbsp;<wbr></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">人生若只如初见,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">何苦老来陌路人。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">世道沧桑情感脆,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">冰河融化道德浑。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">连理变故东西各,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">比翼惊雷海角沦。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">几两钞票称世界,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">当书年少正纯真。</span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> “人生若只如初见”一句出自纳兰性德《木兰花令 拟古决绝词柬友》,是对男女之情的一种解读。这里借用来形容当今的社会现象。</font></span></p>
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<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">七律平起首句不押韵: </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙平⊙仄⊙平仄 </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙仄平平⊙仄平(韵) </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙仄⊙平⊙仄仄 </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙平⊙仄仄平平(韵) </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙平⊙仄⊙平仄 </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙仄平平⊙仄平(韵) </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙仄⊙平⊙仄仄 </span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; BACKGROUND: white; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⊙平⊙仄仄平平(韵) </span></p>
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老舒 发表于 2013-11-8 14:13:00

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>原上</i>在2012-11-13 9:14:00的发言:</b><br/><font size="4" face="黑体">草哥诗词苑今儿个正式开苑了。希望广大喜爱古典诗词前来批评,交流。捣蛋的请绕道。</font> </div>
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<p><font size="4">祝贺开苑一周年!</font></p>
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锅盖头 发表于 2015-2-11 21:38:00

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>原上</i>在2012-11-13 9:11:00的发言:</b><br/>
       
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">七绝 叶(新韵)</font> </p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">春来碧绿秋盈舞,</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">扮靓人间历尽辛。</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">母唤回归沃根本,</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">它年静上枝俏吟。</font></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">七绝<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 爱情天梯(新韵)<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US"> </span></span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">爱情羽化六千级,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">泪洒天庭恋恋依。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">魂驻深山牵日月,</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">磐石感动心泛漪。</span> </p>
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