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原上 发表于 2012-11-13 09:11:00

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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">七绝 叶（新韵）</font> </p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">春来碧绿秋盈舞，</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">扮靓人间历尽辛。</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">母唤回归沃根本，</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">它年静上枝俏吟。</font></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">七绝<span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 爱情天梯（新韵）<span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US"> </span></span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">爱情羽化六千级，</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">泪洒天庭恋恋依。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">魂驻深山牵日月，</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">磐石感动心泛漪。</span> </p>
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原上 发表于 2012-11-13 09:14:00

<font size="4" face="黑体">草哥诗词苑今儿个正式开苑了。希望广大喜爱古典诗词前来批评，交流。捣蛋的请绕道。</font>

崔兰涛1 发表于 2012-11-13 09:21:00

<p>前来支持与观摩！！！</p>

火云 发表于 2012-11-13 10:15:00

好浪漫啊！还特别的实在

原上 发表于 2012-11-13 10:54:00

有木有感兴趣的童鞋去走走6千级的爱情天梯啊。

三流匠心 发表于 2012-11-13 12:32:00

<span style="font-size: large;">我不捣蛋，我跟帖学习来的。</span><div><span style="font-size: large;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 24px; text-indent: 24px; ">爱情天梯啊，很有名的爱情膜拜天梯呵。</span></span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 24px; text-indent: 24px; ">那娃子狠哪，几十年如一日楞是一锤</span><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 24px; text-indent: 24px; ">一锤</span><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; ">凿了一条山路。</span></span></div><div><span style="font-size: large;"><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; ">重庆的，老俩口都长情的很，</span></span></div>

三流匠心 发表于 2012-11-13 13:05:00

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>原上</i>在2012-11-13 9:11:00的发言：</b><br/>
       
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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">七绝<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;<wbr></span></span> 爱情天梯（新韵）<span lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US"> </span></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt" lang="EN-US" xml:lang="EN-US">&nbsp;<wbr></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">爱情羽化六千级，</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">泪洒天庭恋恋依。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">魂驻深山牵日月，</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">磐石感动心泛漪。</span> </p><br/><img title="dvubb" src="skins/default/filetype/jpg.gif" border="0"/>此主题相关图片如下：4ec95f0bh008c3f26d46d&amp;690.jpg<br/><span style="font-size: large; font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">恭贺草哥诗词苑正式开苑！！！&nbsp;</span></div><div class="quote">和草哥小小地探讨一下：草哥的《爱情天梯》勾起三流往日钻研线路功略时的回忆，貌似看过两遍的。刚才又摆渡了哈子<a href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/8245799.htm">http://baike.baidu.com/view/8245799.htm</a></div><div class="quote"><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">上世纪50年代，20岁的</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/2833.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">重庆</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">江津</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/181087.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">中山古镇</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">农家青年</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/1252601.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">刘国江</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">爱上了大他10岁的“俏</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/617278.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">寡妇</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">”</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/8404481.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">徐朝清</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">。为了躲避</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/746436.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">世人</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">的流言，他们携手私奔至深山老林。为让徐朝清出行安全，刘国江一辈子都忙着在</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/511011.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">悬崖峭壁</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">上凿石梯通向外界，如今已有6000多级，被称为“</span><a target="_blank" href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/1314659.htm" style="color: rgb(19, 110, 194); font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">爱情天梯</a><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">”。</span></div><div class="quote"><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">俩位是自由恋爱，你情我愿上山的，至死都不肯离开相恋了一生的悬崖顶上。</span><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; ">他们在山上过得很幸福，很快和，貌似不存在“泪洒...”云云。爱情 羽化...，魂驻 深山...，磐石 感动...这三句很到位，第二句恋恋依也蛮好，只是不必洒泪了。</span></div><div class="quote"><span style="font-family: arial, 宋体, sans-serif; line-height: 25px; ">一点浅见，供草哥斟酌。</span></div><p></p>

青衫1 发表于 2012-11-13 13:52:00

<p>zhang!</p>

珊娅子 发表于 2012-11-13 16:44:00

袭帘之然 发表于 2012-11-13 17:32:00

<p>欢迎草哥回归</p>
<p>应该蕴量和一首呀！！</p>

曾繁仁 发表于 2012-11-14 08:42:00

<font size="4">草叔整一下！</font>

原上 发表于 2012-11-15 14:49:00

<p>三流老兄所言极是。</p>

原上 发表于 2012-11-15 14:50:00

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>袭帘之然</i>在2012-11-13 17:32:00的发言：</b><br/>
<p>欢迎草哥回归</p>
<p>应该蕴量和一首呀！！</p></div>
<p>一直在路上。</p>

原上 发表于 2012-11-15 14:53:00

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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">七绝 叶（新韵）</font> </p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">春来碧绿秋盈舞，</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">扮靓人间历尽辛。</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">母唤回归沃根本，</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px" color="#0715fd">它年静上枝俏吟。</font></p>

原上 发表于 2012-11-15 14:54:00

年年赏叶观叶，年年看见叶飘舞，叶的精神也就是人类的写照。

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